Wednesday, February 14, 2018

Butterfly Dream: In Love Haiku by Debbi Antebi

English Original

foggy dawn
I fall in love
with his image of me

hedgerow, 100, 2016

Debbi Antebi


Chinese Translation (Traditional)


朦朧的黎明
我愛上了我在他心中
的形象

Chinese Translation (Simplified)


朦胧的黎明
我爱上了我在他心中
的形象 


Bio Sketch

Debbi Antebi exhales oxygen while writing poems. Her work has appeared in a number of print and online journals. She lives in London, UK with her husband and books

2 comments:

  1. L1 effectively sets the mood of uncertainty while the unexpected yet emotionally powerful last word turns this topic of love into a question about narcissism.

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